Didn't post my senyru from Thursday. Partially busy, partially chickened out. Repeat to self: this is a hobby. People don't care if it's shit.
And I use an odd count for my some of my ku's and ru's. I don't worry about 5-7-5 syllables (well, sometimes), since English has such short words in relation to Japanese. To keep it brief, I figure 2-4 words/concepts per short lines,and 3-5 words/concepts per long lines.
weak green tea old bag seeping bitter taste-- co-worker *still* talking
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Date: 2008-01-26 08:15 am (UTC)Repeat to self: this is a hobby. People don't care if it's shit.
And I use an odd count for my some of my ku's and ru's. I don't worry about 5-7-5 syllables (well, sometimes), since English has such short words in relation to Japanese. To keep it brief, I figure 2-4 words/concepts per short lines,and 3-5 words/concepts per long lines.
weak green tea
old bag seeping bitter taste--
co-worker *still* talking